英文翻译求助：总结一年的工作,自己还有很多不足.工作不够细心,工作积极性不够,不善于沟通.

英文翻译求助：总结一年的工作,自己还有很多不足.工作不够细心,工作积极性不够,不善于沟通.
英文翻译求助：总结一年的工作,自己还有很多不足.工作不够细心,工作积极性不够,不善于沟通.

英文翻译求助：总结一年的工作,自己还有很多不足.工作不够细心,工作积极性不够,不善于沟通.
Looking back on my work for the past one year,I have found out a lot of imperfections to overcome-like not enough carefulness with the work,a lack of initiatives for work and a to-be-imporoved ability in communication.
After one year's work,I still find a lot of shortcomings in myself.For example,I was not careful enough with my work,I didn't take enough initiatives to do the work and I haven't done very well in communication with others.
给你提供两个版本,前者我觉得地道一点.对原有的中文做了一点小变化再译的,但是放心,大意没变.后者的翻译更忠实你给的汉语,但是更中式一点.

Some of my shortcomings have explosed during my working in the last year. For example, lack of carefulness and activeness in my working, and I am not good at communicating with other people yet. Thangk you.

To sum up my past year's work, it leaves much to be desired, that is , I should have been more careful with my work, more active in the job and more communicative with others. Thank you.