求英语大神把下面句子换成更准确的句子:journey is a reading while you are walking,.完整句子是 journey is a reading while you are walking,use you eyes to take photos and save it in your heart.句子是我自己翻译的本人语

求英语大神把下面句子换成更准确的句子:journey is a reading while you are walking,.完整句子是 journey is a reading while you are walking,use you eyes to take photos and save it in your heart.句子是我自己翻译的本人语
求英语大神把下面句子换成更准确的句子:journey is a reading while you are walking,.
完整句子是 journey is a reading while you are walking,use you eyes to take photos and
save it in your heart.
句子是我自己翻译的本人语法很烂望大神帮忙修改一下期中的错误,英语期中考试发表的时候要用的句子班里挺多外国人（要是错了会很丢脸..)
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求英语大神把下面句子换成更准确的句子:journey is a reading while you are walking,.完整句子是 journey is a reading while you are walking,use you eyes to take photos and save it in your heart.句子是我自己翻译的本人语
Travelling is reading,with your eyes taking photos and your heart saving them.首先不能用it,因为指代的是复数名词,第二,比喻可不一定非要用like这个词,直接说就可以,这叫隐喻.第三,while后面有些多余了.