这句英语有语病吗Sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to the perdon who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when chatting on the internet.I sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to a friend who is a

这句英语有语病吗Sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to the perdon who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when chatting on the internet.I sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to a friend who is a
这句英语有语病吗
Sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,
but say to the perdon who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when chatting on the internet.
I sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to a friend who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when I am chatting with him on the internet.如果改成这样呢

这句英语有语病吗Sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to the perdon who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when chatting on the internet.I sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to a friend who is a
是不是想说：“我坐在电脑前面,心情很糟糕,但却对一个心情很不好的朋友说,你应该振作起来.”我觉得第一句“Sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to the perdon who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when chatting on the internet.”缺乏主语,虽说有可能是祈使句,但祈使句一般是在命令、请求或劝告的语境下.但是第二句“I sit in front of the computer,feeling depressed,but say to a friend who is also in a bad mood that he should be happy when I am chatting with him on the internet.”“say”这个词一般是I say that……所以可以改成“I talk to a friend and say that he should be happy when chatting with me on the internet.”或者把say改成tell

没有但是你好像打错了是person吧

sit应该用进行时态吧！
在后面添上ing
动词做主语应该向名词转化

太乱了，都不知道你写的啥，太没逻辑性了。从句里面还能省略主语和谓语吗？整个大句子连主语都没，But作为连词，就是要联接两句子啊，你这是啥？

看你是按照标准的英语来理解还是按照口语来理解喽，如果按标准英语来说 没主语最大的毛病 口语的话就无所谓了

你的句子改成这样可能会好点：
I am depressed in front of my computer and chatting with my friend by internet who also had bad mood, but now he should be happy after chat with me.
首先你的句子语序不对，前面两句可以合成一句而且尽量简单，...

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你的句子改成这样可能会好点：
I am depressed in front of my computer and chatting with my friend by internet who also had bad mood, but now he should be happy after chat with me.
首先你的句子语序不对，前面两句可以合成一句而且尽量简单，后面那句太长又不明确，可以分成两段，和朋友说话不是SAY，而是TALK. 你那句ALSO IN A BAD MOOD THAT。。。。这个句子不能接THAT从句，因为是转折而不是承接关系。

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Sitting in front of the computer, i felt depressed. my friend who chatted with me on the internet was also in a bad mood at that time. But i told him that he should be happy when chatting with me ...

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Sitting in front of the computer, i felt depressed. my friend who chatted with me on the internet was also in a bad mood at that time. But i told him that he should be happy when chatting with me online . 让人觉得难理解的是“say to a friend" ,觉得"tell" 较好；还有 felling depressed" 现在分词作为状语放在句末，不太恰当，常见的是放在于句首；

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改之前是有语病的，改后还是有。but是连词，前后连接两句完整的句子，而改后but后面的句子没有主语。可以改成下面这样：[Dispressedly sitting in front of computer],I tell a friend (who is also in bad mood) that{ he should be happy when chatting with me on internet}.

person是错的

person

有语病，是run-on sentence，没有结构。应该这样写：
I sit in front of the computer, feeling depressed. However, when chatting with a friend, who was in the same bad mood, on the Internet, I told him to be happy.

person

把but改为and