求大神英语改错Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you is may often feel lonely.That’s why you are new here and people don’t know because about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advi

求大神英语改错Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you is may often feel lonely.That’s why you are new here and people don’t know because about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advi
求大神英语改错
Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you is may often feel lonely.That’s why you are new here and people don’t know because about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices advice below.First,you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own an opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listening to other listen people’s views.Second,you should learn/\ your classmates’ likes and about dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people will and show them that you are actually very friendly.Last but not least,I will always/\ ready to help you.We can take part in some activities together,when I be where can introduce you to others.As time going on,people will know you better and be willing to make With friends with you.Best regards.Peter

求大神英语改错Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you is may often feel lonely.That’s why you are new here and people don’t know because about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advi
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tom, i know there are some troubles for you to communicate with the others, so you may often feel lonely. that's why you are new here and people don't know you; but i think you can make i...

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tom, i know there are some troubles for you to communicate with the others, so you may often feel lonely. that's why you are new here and people don't know you; but i think you can make it if you follow the advices below: first, you should be active in the discussions and show your own opinion about the matters, at the same time, never fail to listen other people's views; second, you should learn what your classmates like and dislike, that's the only way you can know more about different people and show them that actually you are very friendly; last, but not least, i always ready to help you, we can take part in some activities together, than i can introduce you to the others. as the time passes, people will know you better and make friend with you. best regards. peter.
纯手打，我不知道是不是全对，只是有些地方连接得不是很好，所以就改了，但意思一样的

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水燕燕的回答,我力挺.但有两三个地方可以斟酌.一是if only>only if 处,我认为直接去掉only即可.can> will我认为不需要改.用哪个都可以.但后面要改different people will 中要改成people's.when I be where can introduce you to others这句打错了吧,我觉得应该是Where I can intro...

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水燕燕的回答,我力挺.但有两三个地方可以斟酌.一是if only>only if 处,我认为直接去掉only即可.can> will我认为不需要改.用哪个都可以.但后面要改different people will 中要改成people's.when I be where can introduce you to others这句打错了吧,我觉得应该是Where I can introduce you to others.帮下忙而已,不要给我选为最佳答案,如果觉得我们俩的回答较全可以的话,请推水燕燕.谢谢

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