英语达人帮我检查书信错误噢~Dear XXHow are you doing I hope you are well!It has been a long time since I sent last letter for you.Recent three weeks I was preraring for the mid-term examinations.I'm a pleased to tell you I got the highest

英语达人帮我检查书信错误噢~Dear XXHow are you doing I hope you are well!It has been a long time since I sent last letter for you.Recent three weeks I was preraring for the mid-term examinations.I'm a pleased to tell you I got the highest
英语达人帮我检查书信错误噢~
Dear XX
How are you doing I hope you are well!
It has been a long time since I sent last letter for you.Recent three weeks I was preraring for the mid-term examinations.I'm a pleased to tell you I got the highest score in chemistry test in our two classes(2个班级).
I'm a little pity that you've got 27 points in the English listenning comprehension test.May be it was a bit hard for all of you.However you should not be depressed because the difficulty was fair to everyone.Considerring its difficulty,thus you did pretty well!You are always a diligent girl ,so please believe that fate will not play jokes on the person who works hard all the time.Before the college enterance examination finished,the result is totally unclear.
I've tried to call you and give you some encouragement,but no one answerred.I know what I should do to support your stduy.Consequently if you think my letters will waste your time,tell me anyway.What's more ,in this particular period,I think,writing a letter in Chinese couldn't make any sense for your stduy.Therefore I decided that I choose English before the examination.Although writing them is still a great challenge for me .As long as they can give you just a little help ,I'll be delighted.
It will be almost half a month before examination,I think now you should start to keep yourself in good mood and don't let anything or anyone else take it away.Then you are able to give yourself a edge in the tests.In the meantime it's aslo important to treasure your friends and classmates.You know it going to be the last half month to see them.In the future,most of them have to live in your memory,just like mine.
It's time to fight .To be self-confident and going to create your own legend.
Wish you luck
Elly

英语达人帮我检查书信错误噢~Dear XXHow are you doing I hope you are well!It has been a long time since I sent last letter for you.Recent three weeks I was preraring for the mid-term examinations.I'm a pleased to tell you I got the highest
没太多语法错误,但某些表达比较中式英语.
如第一句：How are you doing?在信首这样说并不符合英语习惯.
Then you are able to give yourself a edge in the tests.在edge前应该用an.但是edge表示“优势”（advantage）并不常用.
You know it going to be the last half month …… 应该是it's going to be the last 2 weeks……
To be self-confident and going to create your own legend.在and后面最好用 and you are going to；legend这个词太大了,我个人觉得用future就好了.