英语短文改错Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at half an hour ,but I still couln't work itself out .An hour late ,i wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work.I worked

英语短文改错Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at half an hour ,but I still couln't work itself out .An hour late ,i wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work.I worked
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Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at half an hour ,but I still couln't work itself out .An hour late ,i wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work.I worked it out the help of my father at last.I smiled ,but so does my father.From the experience I konw nothing in the world is impossible whether I make up my minds to do it.
I 有没大写的 个别单词有错误但不算 一共10处语言错误

英语短文改错Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at half an hour ,but I still couln't work itself out .An hour late ,i wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work.I worked
Last night I had the(the去掉) supper.I went to do my homework,I finished all the work(work- jobs) except the last one at(at去掉) half an hour（加上later） ,but I still couln't work itself(itself- it) out .An hour late(late- later) ,i wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work(work- working).I worked it out (加上with)the help of my father at last.I smiled ,but （but- and）so does(does- did) my father.From the experience I konw nothing in the world is impossible whether(whether- if) I make up my minds to do it.

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Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at-----改for--- half an hour ,but I still couln't work -----itself去掉-self------- out .An hour late---应为l...

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Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one at-----改for--- half an hour ,but I still couln't work -----itself去掉-self------- out .An hour late---应为later , i ---大写I----wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on work-----加上-ing---.I worked it out ------少了介词with--- the help of my father at last----。英语的句号是一点，不是圆圈----I smiled ，---but用but不如用and--- so ---does----前面smiled过去式，后面应该也用过去式，即did--- my father.From the experience I konw nothing in the world is impossible -----whether----改if--- I make up my minds to do it.
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Last night I had the supper,I went to do my homework,I finished all the work except the last one for half an hour ,but I still couln't work it out .An hour later , I wanted to give up .But my father told me to keep on working .I worked it out with the help of my father at last.I smiled ，and so did my father.From the experience I konw nothing in the world is impossible if I make up my minds to do it.

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