我刚刚写的英文日记,帮我看看,挑挑毛病顺便评价一下,我不怕批评的,只要中肯,谢谢了.Today, I decide to write English diary every day. Of course my aim is to improve my English.I’m so lazy that I didn’t write too much

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我刚刚写的英文日记,帮我看看,挑挑毛病顺便评价一下,我不怕批评的,只要中肯,谢谢了.Today, I decide to write English diary every day. Of course my aim is to improve my English.I’m so lazy that I didn’t write too much

我刚刚写的英文日记,帮我看看,挑挑毛病顺便评价一下,我不怕批评的,只要中肯,谢谢了.Today, I decide to write English diary every day. Of course my aim is to improve my English.I’m so lazy that I didn’t write too much
我刚刚写的英文日记,帮我看看,挑挑毛病
顺便评价一下,我不怕批评的,只要中肯,谢谢了.
Today, I decide to write English diary every day. Of course my aim is to improve my English.I’m so lazy that I didn’t write too much about my life even in Chinese.But I’ll insist on writing in English becourse I want to succeed.
Today is my second day to invigilate mid-term exminations. Everything goes well. Most of the students obeyed the diciplines. I thought invigilating is an interesting thing, but now I know I was wrong.If you will be an invigilator the next day, you needn’t to prepare lessons. But you will feel tired and bored when invigilating. You must stand and stare at the students all the time.Tomrrow is the last day to invigilate. So I won’t annoy about that.
大家的建议都很好.可四楼的,你说 needn’t 是情态动词吗?我现在说的是“不需要做某事”.反正就是四楼的,说的第五句上面的这些,我不赞同.不过其他建议都很好,谢谢.

我刚刚写的英文日记,帮我看看,挑挑毛病顺便评价一下,我不怕批评的,只要中肯,谢谢了.Today, I decide to write English diary every day. Of course my aim is to improve my English.I’m so lazy that I didn’t write too much
随便提几点.
1,过去的事都应该用过去时(Everything goes well.- went well ).
2,Tomrrow is the last day to invigilate.应该用Tomorrow will be ...
3,保持一致的时态 （ I thought invigilating is an interesting thing － thought,was ）
4,注意语感……

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