He/She gives me the greatest help

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He/She gives me the greatest help

He/She gives me the greatest help
He/She gives me the greatest help

He/She gives me the greatest help
Thanks to my mother.She gave me a new life.She always worries about me.She wakes me up on time every morning.She cooks me three meals every day.She washes clothes for me.Even she helps me with my study.I often win the first prize and I am growing up day by day.So I think she gives me the great help.

She gives me the greatest help.One day,I am going to the a small town with my mother,On the way, I am lost ,I didn't see my mother, I didn't find her,I was very sad, Then,Somebody saw me,She is a girl,She saw me was sad,Then she helps me find my mother,It's very great.I want to say sheThank you.

纠正第一条答复:
one day,表示“一天”,曾经发生过的一天,所以,通篇文章都应该用过去时。
况且,am going,am lost,与didn't时态明显不符合哦。