帮我修改一下英语比赛时的自我介绍吧,谢啦!Hi,everybody.My name is xxx.I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal.But i don't think so!Sometimes it is lovely of wolf.And th

帮我修改一下英语比赛时的自我介绍吧,谢啦!Hi,everybody.My name is xxx.I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal.But i don't think so!Sometimes it is lovely of wolf.And th
帮我修改一下英语比赛时的自我介绍吧,谢啦!
Hi,everybody.My name is xxx.I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal.But i don't think so!Sometimes it is lovely of wolf.And that is why my friends called me wolf.Now let me tell you something about myself.
when i was very young.I'm poor of me English.Because it is very differenct to memorize words.However,once i heve seen a foreigner.He approached me and asked.But i didn't know what he said.So i just go away.After that,I decided to study English carefully.Of course,I met a lot of difficults.But i didn't give up,This is my first time to attend this game.I don't expect that i can get a good maeks.Because this is a exercise to me.I just hope i can do myself justice in this game!
That's all
Thanks.

帮我修改一下英语比赛时的自我介绍吧,谢啦!Hi,everybody.My name is xxx.I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal.But i don't think so!Sometimes it is lovely of wolf.And th
Hi,everybody.My name is xxx.I have another name as well.I am called wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal.But i don't think so.Wolf is sometimes lovely.And that is why my friends called me wolf.Now let me tell you something about myself.
when i was very young.I'm poor of my English.Because it is very differenct to memorize the words.However,once i heve seen a foreigner.He approached me and wanted to communicate with me.But i didn't know what he said.So i just go away.After that,I decided to study English hard.Of course,I meta lot of difficults.But i didn't give up,This is my first time to attend this game.I expect that i can get a good maeks.but this is an exercise to me.whether or no.I just hope i try my best in this game!That's all.Thank you.
这样应该还满好的吧,总的来说,原稿挺不错,但最后面那些修改一下会更好吧.Best wishes for you.祝你比赛成功

I'm poor of me English 改 I'm poor of my English

Hi,everyone.I'm xxx, but I also have another name: wolf. It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal, but sometimes wolf is also very lovely .That's why my friends calle...

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Hi,everyone.I'm xxx, but I also have another name: wolf. It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very brute animal, but sometimes wolf is also very lovely .That's why my friends called me wolf. Ok, now let me tell you something about myself.
when i was very young.I was poor at English.Because it was very difficult for me to memorize words.However,one time, when a foreigner approached me and asked for something, but i didn't know what he said, so i just left. After that,I decided to learn English hard and carefully.Of course,I met a lot of difficults.But i never gave up. Although It's my first time to attend this game, whatever the result of game will be, it won't affect me much. Because i think, since i have stood here, and i have showed myself already, then i'm a winner.
That's all!
Thanks for your listening.
P.S: 英语演讲 自信很重要，可以在比赛前多练习练习，让同学或老师指点指点，注意掌握好演讲时间。Good Luck!

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Hi,everybody.My name is xxx。I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very BRUTAL animal.But I don't think so!Sometimes A WOLF is lovely . And that is why ...

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Hi,everybody.My name is xxx。I also have another name:wolf.It is a novelty name,isn't it?We all know that wolf is a very BRUTAL animal.But I don't think so!Sometimes A WOLF is lovely . And that is why my friends called me wolf.Now let me tell you something about myself.
when i was very young.MY ENGLISH WAS VERY POOR.Because it is very differenct to memorize words.However,once I MET a foreigner.He approached me and asked ME SOMETHING.But i didn't know what he said.So i just WENT away.After that,I decided to study English carefully.Of course,I met a lot of DIFFICULTIES.But i didn't give up,This is my first time to attend this game.I don't expect that i can get a good MARK. Because this is AN exercise to me.I just hope i can do myself justice in this game!
That's all
Thanks.

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